CHANGING a single word in a sentence can make it into a good sentence. Changing punctuation can do the same thing, according to Lydia Davis. Look at Davis’s new first line of Swann’s Way: “For a long time, I went to bed early.” The comma makes it hesitate. Compare it to the Moncrieff (1954) version: “For a…

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